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Senryu 11: Drugs

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Three white trails of dust
I left you all alone-- for
Three white trails of dust
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I actually really like the repetition in this piece. It's more like you're getting the point across with only two lines instead of one, and I find this to be your most powerful piece.

Though, that's just me. I'm weird.